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Took so long 
GIMP for background and paint.net for cats.
I'd not be surprised if it got no comments xD
I made a litrature version of this.
At least this parts done for~
Yours always
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GIMP for background and paint.net for cats.I'd not be surprised if it got no comments xD
I made a litrature version of this.
Midstars past part 1!This is Midstars past part 1 when shes talking or think 'll pur (s) for she and (t) for thinking.
(st) That's us. My father Hollystar, my mother Tigertail and me I'm called Midkit.
''Come on midkit, you've been a kit for 3 days, and you still haven't gone out!''
(st) Tigertails only trying to help but shes right,'' ''all the other kits are here when I'm asleeep.'' (s)''Can I go outside?'' ''If you want midkit''.Said tigertail.
(st)The camp is a big place for a kit !
To be continued...
At least this parts done for~
Yours always
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I like how you color the characters, and the expressions look really good. The one thing I didn't like was that, if Midshadow was a kit here, she would be a bit smaller... right (unless the picture is zooming in on her)?
The backgrounds are really nice, and I like the character design; maybe the one thing this comic needs is caption boxes? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt="
" title="Shrug"/>Also, I noticed a few spots in the comic that were not colored, like Midkit(shadow)'s ear in the last frame.
Overall, great job! I'd love to see more of these!
=Mcingake